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Melissa

Part 1

Melissa


Melissa is a sweet girl who finds herself paying for the actions of her father in the most brutal way. She is kidnapped, tortured, and gang-raped on camera before meeting her end.


More parts to come..


Description


       The Blue Dragon was an organization that made its money by kidnapping innocent victims, raping, torturing, and finally killing them on tape then selling these films to the rich perverts of the world. Jack Crane, a distinguished detective has been chasing after this organization for the last 5 years, trying to put them out of business and framing the leading members. But recently, his efforts have started to deal strong blows to the organizations activities. A number of the small kidnappers were being apprehended, and even though they knew little about the higher echelons of the organizations, they did give away information on the basic tactics the organization was using to hire new members and choose their potential actors/victims. As a result, it was decided that he should be taught a lesson that would make him stop for good. Direct threats and bribes didnt seem to work with Jack, so it was decided to move right into business.

A few weeks later, Jack received a package containing a DVD. Hoping it was some kind of a clue or inside information that would help him with his investigation; he promptly put it in his DVD player and pressed “play”. For the first few seconds there was only a black screen, suddenly a logo appeared which Jack immediately recognized as the famous logo of the blue dragon. “This could be something”, he thought to himself. Almost immediately, a voice started to talk:


      “ Jack Crane As you may have noticed by now this is a message from the Blue Dragon organization addressed to you. It seems that you have left us no option but to give you this “free” gift as an incentive. We hope that after watching this DVD you will change your mind about our organization and find other career paths to tread”…


       With that, the screen changed, and Jack was greeted with the sight of a completely naked girl except for a hood on her head. She was suspended by her wrists which were spread out wide in a spread-eagle manner. The girl had a magnificent, athletic, body, with fully rounded C-cup breasts and small nipples. She was sobbing quietly. Jack felt uneasy, feeling that the girls overall appearance seemed familiar! With that, a masked man approached her and removed the hood.


“ Oh My God!!!!!! “ Jack shouted, jumping abruptly from his chair. It was Melissa! His 21-years old daughter! Melissa was graduating from college soon, and during her studies she was living in the college dorm far away from her home town. Jack had spoken with her only 4 days ago, and so had no idea of her being kidnapped and in the hands of these sick animals! 


       “ Now then…” the voice continued: “ I think you know who this is, we hope that this video will convince you how futile it is to stand up to us, and if you value the life of your other daughter, sweet 14 year old Melanie, you will learn your lesson….”


Jack couldnt believe his eyes or ears. What were they saying? “Value the life of your OTHER daughter? What about MELISSA!!!? To his absolute horror, the voice was still going on:


       “ Im sure you are acquainted with our work, so no more details needed. We will let the film roll on”.


       “ Too bad for poor Melissa…” the voice smirked: “ We have recently switched to DVDs, which give us a better clarity and allow us to record LONGER sessions! As this is your daughter we have prepared something special for her… “


With that, the voice stopped talking and the camera fully zoomed on the Melissas naked body, slightly covered with a sheen of sweat from all the lighting. Jack couldnt gaze away even though this was his daughter. He was probably still in shock to react in any way. Small droplets of sweat were tickling from Melissas wet brownish hair down on her heaving chest, between her breasts, through her navel, and collecting on the lips of her completely shaved pussy which looked like it was shaven just recently, probably by the kidnappers. After a while, the camera zoomed out a little and Melissa started to scream and beg as a masked man appeared right next to Melissa with a viscous-looking cane in his hand! The cameras moved and were now showing Melissa from the back along with her beautiful and firm ass. Melissa was begging loudly:


“ Please, why are you doing this to me, I have done nothing wrong, please dont use this thing on me..PLEAAASSE!”


The man didnt waste any time, raising his hand with the cane, it pierced the air in a swooshing sound before landing on Melissaa ass cheeks with a loud crack.


“CRACK!...”


Melissa howled in pain, and started to cry as cruel red welt started to appear where the cane landed. The man left her little reprieve though, landing a second, even harder hit


“CRACK!..”


“CRACK!..”


“AHHHHHHH”


Loud howls and grunts were all that was coming from Melissas mouth now as two more hits registered on her ass. And yet, the man continued..



“CRACK!.. “CRACK!..” “CRACK!..” “CRACK!..”….


After 10 strikes, her ass was already a heap of angry reddish welts with some of them already starting to turn blue. Melissa tried desperately to wiggle away from the cane, but her attempts were futile as the man seemed to be a professional, hitting her always where he wanted, then giving her a few seconds to feel the full swath of the pain before landing another strike.


By the time he reached 20 strikes, Melissa had resigned to sobbing which was interrupted with a loud shriek whenever the  cane hit. Her ass looked like a complete mess, and by now, she was practically hanging from her wrists since her legs couldnt support her anymore. On the 20th lash, the hardest one by a wide margin, her bladder gave up and small streams of urine flowed from her pussy down to the floor. The man grinned:


“ Now then, since you cant clean this up, you will have to pay for it”


With that, he unzipped his pants, took out his erect cock, added some lube from a nearby table, and to Melisss horror, approached her from behind. Melissa barely registered what was going to happen to her till half of his dick was lodged in her ass hole!


AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, NO, PLEEAASSSE, DONT, IVE NEVER DONE THIS, NO, AHHHHHHHHH!


One more push and she was fully impaled on the mans cock. Jacks eyes nearly popped out as he was watching. He could not believe what was happening to his innocent daughter. How could there be such animals in the world? how?!


Melissa was still screaming for the horrible pain she was enduring.  She almost felt like she was being split in two. The man kept pounding and pumping his dick like a piston in and out of her for  almost 5 minutes before filling her bowels with his cum. As his limping cock came out with a loud pop, the cameras were zooming closely on Melissas gaping hole with a pinkish mixture of cum and blood flowing from it. Meanwhile, the main dressed himself, took his cane, and left from the stage area. Melissa just wanted to die in that moment. She couldnt believe what was happening to her. Her pains from the beating were almost completely masked now by the pain she was feeling in her ass. Just as she was feeling she could not take anymore of this, another man showed up, and another, and another! Before she knew it, she was now surrounded by 10 naked masked men!


Melissa found the energy to scream again as another man came behind her and proceeded to anally fuck her for a second time! The man was even more brutal and took a longer time, and while it was not hurting as much as the first time, it was psychologically more degrading being fucked in front of 10 men. As soon as the guy finished pumping his cum into her, another took his place, this one also taking his time with her. As soon as finished with her, the others kept standing there. Melissa though she could get a reprieve, but to her horror, she saw two of them grab two leather bullwhips, and stand behind her on opposite sides. Before she knew it, she heard a whip swooshing in the air before connecting with a loud crack with her back!


“Aaaaagggghhhhhhhhhh”


Melissa grunted in pain as she was sure the whip cut her skin. Nonetheless, the cameras only showed deep red welts. Before fully comprehending what is happening to her the other man landed his whip on her back


“Ahhhhhhhhhhh, PLEASE DONT, IVE HAD ENOUGH PLEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSS”


They kept alternating their whipping action until her back was fully covered in welts, and by the time each one had landed his 50th lash, her back was bleeding slightly from a couple of places. Melissa almost fainted in the end, and had to be revived with some ammonia to endure the rest of her ordeal. As soon as the 100 lashes were complete, the 8 remaining men proceeded to continue with her anal fucking. Now every time Melissa would seem to get quieter or less reactive, they would twist her nipples, or even worse, pinch her badly bruised back. It took almost an hour before they were finally done with her, and as the camera zoomed to the pile of cum beneath her, her asshole looked to have been permanently ruined, never to come back to its original size.


Jack now had tears in his eyes as he saw his daughter being whipped, caned, and anally gang-raped by almost a dozen animals. He could not believe his eyes when he saw that they were not quiet finished with her!


To be contuned,,













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