The Greatest Submission

The Greatest Submission

Written by Hawk_Fann and Sbbe, his Slave

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WARNING!  THIS IS A WORK OF EROTIC BDSM FICTION.  

 

IT IS ADULT ORIENTED MATERIAL OF A SEXUAL NATURE.  

 

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 The Author does not condone any of these actions, this is fantasy, make believe, you know day dreaming.

 

 Copyright 2006, Hawk Fann & Sbbe.  All rights reserved.

 

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14

 

Kimberly reached out to her Master and he took her hand and helped her walk away from Sarah. “Master what do you want? I don’t know what to do?” he could tell she was almost ready to break herself.

 

Jason smiled, “You can choose anything you want, as long as it involves inverted suspension, lactation and a cattle prod.” He smiled touched her face and chuckled. “Whatever punishment you get her to take for you should be proof that she is now a sub.”

 

Kimberly realized her master was try to make her smile but she was just too exhausted.  “Master?”

 

“Finish here and I’ll put you both to bed.” He stroked her face and motioned for her to walk back to Sarah.

 

Kimberly walked toward Sarah and slowly squatted down before her so they were eye level. “I am your Mistress Slut?” Sarah nodded and Kimberly grabbed her right nipple and yanked down. “Say it Slut.”

 

“Yes you are my Mistress.”

 

“I can do with you as I please Slut?”

 

“Yes mistress you can do with me as you please.”

 

“You will willingly move toward your torture to please me and my master?”

 

Sarah glared at Jason and nodded, another quick yank and she spoke. “I will do as I am told, mistress.”

 

Then crawl toward the big wooden frame. Kimberly struggled to stand and found Jason lifting her. They watched as Sarah moved forward on her hands and knees.

 

“Master I won’t be able to move the bars.”

 

“What she can’t do I will, but you must master her Kimberly. It’s time she proved herself. If you fail me…”

 

“I won’t master, I promise, I just need your help.”

 

Jason nodded and patted her bottom sending her toward the big machine.

 

 

Kimberly stepped back and looked at Sarah she could hardly believe that Sarah had willingly allowed herself to be restrained so cruelly. She squatted on a heavy wooden beam about 3 feet off the floor, her legs pulled wide cruel heavy u bolts chained to the frame kept her spread obscenely.

 

A big black dildo anchored her pussy to the beam she squatted on. It impaled her deeply the tip painfully bumping her cervix. A heavy iron bar held two cruel sets of steal bands that encircled her generous tits. The pressure being applied to Sarah’s breasts already turning them blue. Harsh clamps pinched her stretched nipples a rough thin rope ran from the clamps to Sarah’s big toes. Every little movement would be torture.

 

Sarah’s hands were inserted in the upright stocks that her head was inserted through. Sarah’s tongue was pulled from her mouth two wooden dowels clamped it painful. Sarah’s nose was pinched and pulled high forcing her neck at a painful angle. Even Sarah’s hair was braided with a leather strap that held a big thick hook up in her ass. Any movement was self torture while being still was excruciating pain.

 

Kimberly walked up and pulled on the lines from nipple to big toes. “Each part of your bondage is symbolic Slut.” She pulled hard till Sarah screamed into her dowel gag then she released the pressure. You ran, now you are impaled, your legs spread. Your wicked tongue held out for punishment because of your negative words to my master. Even your haute nose is punished to remind you, you must never think you are better, you are the least. A hook up your ass to remind you that the pain in your ass can be real. Such a stiff neck held to remind you that you will bend your neck to my will.”

 

“Prove yourself Sarah, fuck that dildo stuffed in your cunt.” Sarah’s eyes widened at the order but she tried, she screamed into the dowels. “That is just not good enough slut. I demand exuberance at my orders. Kimberly reached to the table and lifted a tight vicious alligator clip. “You remember this.”

 

Suddenly Sarah was enthusiastically fucking the dildo. Her nipples being pulled harshly with each rocking movement. Kimberly stood there watching waiting. Sarah just couldn’t keep it up and when she slowed Kimberly reached in and mercilessly popped the clip on to her clit. Sarah pumped up and down for a few more then her sweat covered body collapsed in exhaustion.

 

The electricity that shot through Sarah’s body caused convulsions, her pussy fucked by the giant dildo, her ass by the thick hook. Her nipples, hair and nose stretched, pulled.

 

“You do all this to yourself,” Kimberly said, staring into her eyes as she stood on a step stool. “But you do it for me. Tell me you love me.” Kimberly spiked the tens unit she held in her hand making Sarah dance. The moment the charge was dropped Sarah begged through the gag, drool and sweat.

 

“I love,” she gasped speaking muffled as her tongue throbbed in its restraint. “I love mistress,” she mumbled franticly. “I love Mistress.”