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    The Greatest Submission
    
    Author: Hawk_Fann & Sbbe
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    (Added on Aug 14, 2006)
            (This month 132005 readers) (Total 148324 readers) | 
   
   
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    The greatest submission Jason could ask of his slave was for her to dominate. | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
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    Jan 23, 2009 | 
   
   
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        excellent, well done (10/10) 
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    frankee
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    Aug 27, 2006 | 
   
   
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        Awesome!!! i love the characters and i hope there is more adventures in stores fo them! (9/10) 
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StillBehindBlueEyes
  (Edit)  (Aug 28, 2006)
 
        - Smiles, thank you frankee. We already have a start on some little adventures for our little group. Glad you enjoyed it. I'll let Master Hawk know. 
 
       
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    smokey1957
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    Aug 18, 2006 | 
   
   
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        Just a bit difficult to get in the story but when your in it is anice story to reed. I do hope that the writer wil continue to write more of this two slaves (9/10) 
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StillBehindBlueEyes
  (Edit)  (Aug 18, 2006)
 
        - We are very glad you enjoyed the story and gave us such a good rating. We already have plans for more Sarah stories. 
 Thank you 
       
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    | Reviewer: 
    dennisthmn
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    Aug 17, 2006 | 
   
   
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        A very good story, execelent BDSM (7/10) 
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StillBehindBlueEyes
  (Edit)  (Aug 17, 2006)
 
        - We appreciate the kind comments. Thank you.
 
       
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    pj1488
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    Aug 16, 2006 | 
   
   
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        i enjoyed the story immensely and hope you write more. the use of the slave to dominate his wife was a fantastic idea, look forward to reading more. (9/10) 
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StillBehindBlueEyes
  (Edit)  (Aug 16, 2006)
 
        - It makes a writer's job so fun when people enjoy your writing. Master will be please to hear you enjoyed his idea.
 
       
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    little_rose
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    Aug 15, 2006 | 
   
   
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        WOW! So good guys, well done. I really liked the fact that we had both sides to empathise with- dominatee and dominator. Very hot:) (9/10) 
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StillBehindBlueEyes
  (Edit)  (Aug 15, 2006)
 
        - Thank you so much. We really enjoyed writing it. I'll let Master know you enjoyed it. :)
 
       
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