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War Has Always Been Hell
Author: Bruce Boxer
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(Added on Apr 8, 2012)
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The second North American Civil war is as vicious as the first; however, the Federal forces conduct lacks traditional adherence to the rules of war resulting in prisoners becoming slaves to pain. |
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| Reviewer:
jrockitt
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Apr 9, 2012 |
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I liked the scenario-reminds me of my first bdsm fantasies. You' ve set up a good storyline for chapter 2 with Julie. A little more of the main character's thoughts and feelings would enhance it, and a little proofreading for some minor spelling glitches. By all means, continue. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Boxer
(Edit) (Apr 10, 2012)
- Appreciate the thoughtful review and concur with developing Lily's character--doing so in chapters 2 and 3. The proofreading is SO frustrating--MS Word helps me when it shouldn't.
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