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Maggie's New Slave Author: Sam W.
(Added on Aug 14, 2011) (This month 52568 readers) (Total 90613 readers)
Maggie is the teen who has everything, including her own personal slave. She can't wait to play with her newest one, the beautiful Katie.

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Weighed Average (?): (7/10)
Average Rating: (7/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (4/10)

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Reviewer: Jorgy444 (Edit) Rating: Jul 24, 2012
Sorry, just not that impressed!
Just a jerk off story! Needs better
sentence structure, proofreading. (4/10)

Reviewer: jip (Edit) Rating: Jan 24, 2012
Well adding let say 10 years of the given ages in the story, it wud be more realistic.
But the story is sexy to read! (6/10)

Reviewer: Martiniman (Edit) Rating: Jan 2, 2012
16 year old virgin producing breast milk...hmmm? (7/10)

Reviewer: Dryhill (Edit) Rating: Oct 1, 2011
A nice piece of fantasy with well described actions.
The only problem with this story is Maggie seems to have had her new slave for 48 hours and has not given Katie anything to drink or eat. One can go about three days without water, but with the painful muscle contractions Katie is experiancing she must be dehydrating rapidly. So Katie must have something to drink soon otherwise Maggie will only have a dead slave to play with. (7/10)

Reviewer: suspension_guy (Edit) Rating: Sep 7, 2011
Nice well done story with good details. Looking forward to more chapters. Keep up the nice work. (9/10)

Reviewer: Dusty Spring (Edit) Rating: Aug 28, 2011
Not even close to possible. Might as well call it science fiction. (4/10)

Reviewer: bullfinch (Edit) Rating: Aug 24, 2011
An excellent start, more please. (8/10)

Reviewer: Major Littmann (Edit) Rating: Aug 18, 2011
A very good start, a few nagging doubts regarding the plot surely someone will miss her and start a (wo)manhunt but otherwise its excellent.
As regards which drection the plot takes don't listen to advice, this is your fantasy it's great so far, trust your own judgement. (9/10)

Reviewer: Michael247 (Edit) Rating: Aug 16, 2011
I've written an in depth analysis of "Maggie's New Slave" and posted it on my blog at
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http://michaelalexanderstories.blogspot.com/2011/08/story-review-maggies-new-slave-by-sam-w.html
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Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
(www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (8/10)

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