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Friday Night Slave or I'm not Mary!
Author: lits
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(Added on Jul 4, 2011)
(This month 39418 readers) (Total 44343 readers) |
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Marianthis is not Mary. Or rather, she wishes she wasn't the woman who serves as a slave at a kinky club every Friday night. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Thirstyguy
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Aug 25, 2011 |
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Riveting writing from this author again. A delightful love story and psychological study of the main character, with some exciting BDSM thrown in as part of the story. The authors characterisations are excellent as is the pace and setting of the writing. There is also the best humor to be had out of hundreds of stories on this site! The editing is not perfect unfortunately, but is a minor problem. You will not want to put this down, and like me will probably read every word of this from start to finish. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lucy
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2011)
- Thank you very much, Thirstyguy. In the meantime i've found someone who's going to edit my stories, so that should get better.
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Tease Cathy
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Jul 27, 2011 |
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I really enjoyed this. I thought it was good psycologically, and reminded me of the mental disorder like what is seen in Fight Club. I love the romance aspect, and I love Finn.
I do have to say i did not love the copious amounts of spelling, grammar and mechanical errors. normally having that many would cause me to navigate away from the page, especially because it did at times detract from the story, but something told me to stay; to keep reading. And i really enjoyed the story. I just think you need an editor next time. Please, keep writing (not of this story, it ended in just the right place, but write other things, too.) (8/10)
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- Replied by:
lucy
(Edit) (Aug 8, 2011)
- Thank you and glad you liked it. Yeah, guess I need an editor.
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 17, 2011 |
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Amazingly psychological, yet hot at the same time. Really good work here. Will it be continued? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lucy
(Edit) (Jul 23, 2011)
- Thank you, Curtis. No, this story won't be continued. I think that everything's been said that needed to be said.
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janmayen
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Jul 9, 2011 |
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Excellently written. Very erotic! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lucy
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2011)
- Thank you!
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