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J-Son
Author: princess0beauty
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(Added on Apr 9, 2002)
(This month 49258 readers) (Total 67299 readers) |
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A teenage girl gets blackmailed by her boyfriend's father. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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Needs more detail, everything seemed rush
It had the potential of being a great story and seems to be getting there (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Apr 12, 2004 |
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Good beginning. A little rushed. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jun 1, 2003 |
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This story definitely needs improving. It lacks detail, and actions are poorly described. The reason for the whole act wasn't given until the very end, and the action was so pathetic it might as well have been a PG-13 movie. (1/10)
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Humiliator
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Jun 18, 2002 |
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A good portrayal of the submissive mind. More could have happened and certainly greater detail would help. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
watcher69
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Apr 10, 2002 |
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Goos Start, Needs MUCH more detail. (4/10)
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