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The homeless and poor peoples winter feast
Author: Rotneb
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(Added on Mar 20, 2010)
(This month 58985 readers) (Total 69256 readers) |
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Every year there was organized a charity festival in the village hall for the city's homeless and poor people, a feast where all the poor once a year get filled stomachs and amused. This year will be something special when Lisa and eight other young women voluntarily donate their naked meat to the feast banquet and to entertainment for the homeless and poor. |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
HuManiMal
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Sep 23, 2012 |
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Idea useable, but poor execution (pun!) and horrid grammar/English. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Michael247
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May 6, 2010 |
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This is the second Rotneb story I have tried to read. The English is atrocious in a way that can only be described as haphazard and almost unintelligible. I can't in good consciousness recommend or applaud this story on any front. Michael Alexander (www.michaelalexanderstories.com)
(2/10)
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| Reviewer:
avidreader
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Mar 31, 2010 |
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I dont like cannabal stories but i feel as if the other reviewer was either a bit unfair or a little hasty, the english in this is fine. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
IDCrewDawg
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Mar 22, 2010 |
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This piece looks as if it were translated using Google translate or some other web translation engine. The English is so atrocious that it's barely readable. (1/10)
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