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owning him...
Author: finesse
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(Added on Feb 19, 2010)
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Feb 22, 2010 |
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You obviously do not speak English. Even considering that, your story is not very good. It is disjointed, it does not flow. there is no real training. (2/10)
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