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A worm's story
Author: Chastized
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(Added on Dec 20, 2009)
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A young man is dumped by his girl freind,only to be drawn into a life of slavery and suffering. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
hoodedandmasked
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Feb 2, 2010 |
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Very exciting!
Please continue until the worm is castrated... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
svnrn
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Jan 12, 2010 |
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Awesome story. Please give more, and please go into further detail :) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
SirBosk1
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Jan 9, 2010 |
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Poorly written with poor or no puncutation. Run on sentences, bac spelling. Fourth Grade level writing. The premise isn't bad and with an editor to correct the poor writing, it could be good. I'm not wasting my time on any further chapters. Its too difficult to read. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
CarolinaSpanker
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Dec 28, 2009 |
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I do hope so much for more. May I suggest a humiliating spanking from Debbie followed by her thick strap on dildo pounding into his blazing red butt causing him to fart as air is rapidly pushed out of his asshole emabarassing him further. (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Dec 26, 2009 |
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Great story and hope to read more. Great plot and very good friends. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
kinkcrazy
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Dec 25, 2009 |
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A great start (9/10)
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