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Escape from the Dungeon
Author: Ashantai
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(Added on Dec 13, 2008)
(This month 10072 readers) (Total 20544 readers) |
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A short introduction to my future bondage adventure series. Fantasy setting for now, though it will move between time zones. Please give me thoughts about this, to see whether it is worth continuing |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jdsaunders01
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Jan 5, 2009 |
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Well written, and shows definite promise for future development (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Dec 21, 2008 |
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A different "world" with each transport. Witches in one world, goddesses in the next? There is a fine potential here, which could easily expand to dozens of chapters, This tale is well written and moves along with a fine pace, though a few more lurid details to attract a wider audience might be needed. Bravo! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Grey_Slayer
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Dec 17, 2008 |
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A nice beginning. Please continue the story, and describe how the girls are captured again and returned to the dungeon, and the unpleasant things that happen to them. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
diem
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Dec 17, 2008 |
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good start. I expect these women will be caught and brought back for proper processing (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Ashantai
(Edit) (Dec 21, 2008)
- Thank you kindly all for reviewing.
My intention is to move the story between totally different settings - sort of Sliders but in a kinky, sexier way! I'm doing it that way so that the settings do not get stale.
Of course, because I like F/f a lot, I'll also have a badie who can follow them around and generally get in the way!
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