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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Nov 19, 2008 |
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I assume there will be more to come. This chapter really is too short to warrant a review . I could have rated it a 3 just as easily, because there is not enough content. Next time don'y rush to submit until you have dotten to at least 1 "good part". (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
lucy
(Edit) |
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Nov 19, 2008 |
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good idea and a devious ending, hihihi.
some more work on grammar and spelling wouldn't hurt, though.
And maybe also some more elaboration on the wording. Starting every other sentence with "I" gets boring with time.
And last but not least: if you don't intend to write a second part the storycodes are quite misleading. (5/10)
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