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Justicia
Author: Hemo101
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(Added on May 14, 2008)
(This month 11953 readers) (Total 23570 readers) |
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A woman's sinful past finally catches up with her |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Boundtowrite
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May 20, 2008 |
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First story, and the one I liked the most of this writer. Several interesting scenes, just within the range of the possible.
In my taste, to slow at the start and it is really a pity that several exciting scenes at the end only take one short paragraph each. These have so much potential! (in my humble opinion).
Still, nice to read, it can get your mind-cinema started. With some editing it might become really good. (7/10)
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