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Kathy and Fiona
Author: obohobo
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(Added on Nov 27, 2001)
(This month 83616 readers) (Total 106127 readers) |
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A gang punishes a schoolgirl when she doesn't hand over all her dinner money. Severe retribution follows which has unexpected consequences. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 3, 2004 |
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enjoyable (7/10)
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Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jan 22, 2004 |
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I think this one has been underrated. It is a good story. I just wish I knew what happened at the sex party! (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Jul 11, 2002 |
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believability: 4 - doesn't get into the minds of the people involved, for me. And it disappears with no logic from one flight of fancy into another. I lost interest after first couple of parts grammar/spelling etc: 7 - better than many. Still lots of errors, e.g. "cuntal" is not a word. style: 5 (5/10)
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Reviewer:
luscious
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Dec 19, 2001 |
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Not too bad! Could use more hard-n-fast scenes, but writing is decent and the plot is interesting. (7/10)
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