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Rachel's Story
Author: Major Falconer
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(Added on Nov 20, 2001)
(This month 51720 readers) (Total 69858 readers) |
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A Young girl at her first job. The manager shows her the price of a mistake in the office. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
williampeter
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Mar 20, 2003 |
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Boring and not very imaganative and (4/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Aug 11, 2002 |
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Sorry, but couldn't make it past the first couple of paragraphs. Endless run-on sentences, unclear syntax (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
oldlion
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Nov 30, 2001 |
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I loved it has all elements I enjoy (10/10)
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