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    The Brothel
    
    Author: sherryjones
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    (Added on Sep 22, 2007)
            (This month 78781 readers) (Total 104058 readers) | 
   
   
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    Co-ed is kidnapped after winning a wet t-shirt contest. | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    JimmyJump
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        Excellent account of an evening on the town gone awry, commencing a downward spiral towards despair. Extremely well written. Reads like an elaborate screenplay for a TV mini-series. A pity it seems not finished yet. JJ (10/10) 
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    soulcatch
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    Sep 30, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Great story, loved your descriptions (9/10) 
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    ramses
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    Sep 26, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Well written story. Good development of characters. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. (9/10) 
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sherryjones
  (Edit)  (Sep 26, 2007)
 
        - thanks - just posted five more chapters
 
       
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    | Reviewer: 
    Sam Blythe
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    Sep 25, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Story led me along, enticing me further in.  Use of language was good as was the development of primary characters.  An excellent beginning and I can't wait for more. (10/10) 
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sherryjones
  (Edit)  (Sep 26, 2007)
 
        - thanks - i like tens! just posted five more chapters.
 
       
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    | Reviewer: 
    preparer29
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    Sep 24, 2007 | 
   
   
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        well done; looking forward to further developments. (9/10) 
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sherryjones
  (Edit)  (Sep 26, 2007)
 
        - thanks - five more chapters are waiting to be posted.  hope you enjoy them!
 
       
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