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The Locket
Author: Kraven
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(Added on Jul 17, 2007)
(This month 10110 readers) (Total 20451 readers) |
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Was a playful agreement between friends suddenly turning into something different? |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jul 18, 2007 |
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I quite enjoyed it! I think there is a part 2 to be had - Does Amy know? How will it come up in conversation? Does she want the slavish attention? Is Amy bi? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JoannePare53
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Jul 18, 2007 |
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Dear Kraven, Please do continue it sounds so lovely and intriguing.
Joanne (9/10)
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foxeye1
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Jul 17, 2007 |
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A very promising start. Well written and a nice tease and denial theme. I hope you continue with the story. Thank you for your efforts. (8/10)
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cum girl
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Jul 17, 2007 |
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Nice idea. Well written with a good use of language. Got a little lost in the change of time frames. Bit too slow moving, got bored, would prefer a bit more pace. (7/10)
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igachu80
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Jul 17, 2007 |
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A good first start, well written. There's a lot of potential here for an imaginative story. Believable characters and situation. I'll be looking for the next one. (8/10)
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serveyou2
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Jul 17, 2007 |
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This was a fine first episode, will Amy know and want this for real or will she be surprised. Keep up with the character development, can't wa't for the next chapter (8/10)
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