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African Slave
Author: bonny
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(Added on May 12, 2007)
(This month 14718 readers) (Total 31724 readers) |
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My fantasy life as a slave for black men in Africa. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (4/10) |
| Average
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| Reviewer:
mirage
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Rating: |
Oct 6, 2007 |
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The story look like it has ended.
way too short to comment. It's very difficult to write a good story under 1000 words.
(4/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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May 15, 2007 |
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With apologies to Mkemse, this portion, though
short, is quite long enough to judge. There is
no back story, no characterization, no local
color, no attempt at plausibility. What there
IS, however, is lots of typos. I plan to skip
Part 2.
(2/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 13, 2007 |
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the part posted is too short to pass real judgment on the quality of the story (5/10)
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