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The Patriarch Alliance- A Simple Day Author: GhostWriter
(Added on Mar 2, 2007) (This month 22775 readers) (Total 28943 readers)
A simple day for a brother and sister in the Patriarch Alliance

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Weighed Average (?): (7/10)
Average Rating: (7.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: ThisGirl (Edit) Rating: Mar 6, 2007
The story has great potential as an interesting BDSM sci-fi tale, however, I found the writing to shift into awkward grammar that made the scenes confusing.
Although I found it very arousing, I could not give a higher rating because of the odd technical errors and inconsistent form (perhaps lack of form).
(6/10)

Reviewer: ElectricBadger (Edit) Rating: Mar 2, 2007
Interesting, and a difficult review. Definitely a really good story -- well written, well thought out and overall...well, good! However, it could use a quick grammar check, and it does have to be taken on its own terms. Not much in the way of sex or plot here: just a galleria of imagination. (9/10)

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