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Crystal Clear
Author: Tainted Angel
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(Added on Jan 11, 2007)
(This month 14259 readers) (Total 26506 readers) |
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\"She knew that she was out of her depth; she was usually self assured, confident, controlled. She was proud of her ability to handle herself well, people saw what she wanted them to see, that is not to say that she was deceptive she had just got used to dealing with things alone. If she was honest with herself she was a bit of a control freak. It was safer that way. She always thought that she would like to have a man who would take the lead and make her give everything, stripped and bare to the core, in her minds eye she saw it being safe and perfect, being happy and relaxed while still feeling electric. That was not how she now found herself, caught between wanting and needing to be there and the growing fear of falling and the urge to run. Crystal knew that this man was going to make her give everything whether she offered it or not, her very soul was laid open to his gaze, she would learn now the most basic of lessons. Be Careful What You Wish For! |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 3, 2009 |
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Very well done. Onlly slight drawback, is that there's a certain feel of detatchment to the story, like I couldn't connect to the Crystal and Gary, which made the 'experience' slightly less erotic. Must be me.
JJ (9/10)
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desdemona
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Aug 2, 2008 |
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I would give this a ten but for the grammatical errors throughout. They were slightly distracting. The story was extremely well written, though, with not only the physical but also the emotional desires and experiences of the characters expressed pretty much flawlessly. I cannot wait to hear more about Crystal's journey. Wow. (9/10)
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Panther007
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Jun 15, 2007 |
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This has to be the most beautiful and erotic story that I have read in a very long time. Simply amazing. I can't wait to read more of your work. (10/10)
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oldwino
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Feb 2, 2007 |
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Best story I've read here. Very well written and so erotic and thought provoking. I know my young gf(38) will love it. lease write more. I'm still stunned from how moved I was by this story. Took two bottles of wine to finish it.
You have a real gift for writing very erotic stories without it being al about the mechanics of sex. This is a real love story. (10/10)
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castle2001
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Jan 13, 2007 |
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An excellent start. A relationship worthy of continuing. (10/10)
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BlackIrish1495
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Jan 12, 2007 |
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This story has held my intrest like no other. Can't wait until I can read more. (10/10)
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Wolfscout
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Jan 12, 2007 |
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smiles.. I have read more many stories.
Yours held my attention even while you worked on it. Created a need to read more of and ended the same way. I'd love to see the two characters and how they grow together even more...
Please continue.
(10/10)
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fantazmaster
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Jan 12, 2007 |
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This an extremely well written story as it captures the thoughts and emotions of Crystal,the female character in the story, as Gary the dominant in the story draws, Crystal ever deeper into his web of dominance.
The actions during each of these stages is certainly well written to the point the writer paints a virtual picture with her words.
I certainly hope there are additions to this story as Crystal is drawn even further into this web of dominance. (10/10)
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lt0069
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Jan 11, 2007 |
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well written, an enjoyable read ,easy to follow the characters feelings , excitments, and fears.
well done... (9/10)
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