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Deathshow
Author: Shyloch
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(Added on Jan 2, 2007)
(This month 24333 readers) (Total 45783 readers) |
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Two girls are invited as guests to an island. They are entertained by the rich inhabitants of the island, until... showtimes comes. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Jan 3, 2007 |
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The story is very creative, but there's no surprise. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jan 3, 2007 |
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The story itself was imaginative,extreme and stimulating. The story could have been great with a little help from a proof reader. Head to the foums, ask about, there are plenty of folks willing to help.(ESL?) (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Jan 2, 2007 |
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An above average snuff tale - I think that the first part of the story, where the two victims to be are trying to argue their way out of their sticky situation, would have been better if we had more idea of their emotional state, etc. I know we can imagine it, but that's what separates good stories from great ones. Keep up the good work, Shyloch. (7/10)
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