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The Facilitator
Author: DrPain
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(Added on Jun 4, 2006)
(This month 32097 readers) (Total 62012 readers) |
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Mike Wilson is a \'Facilitator\' who performs ceremonies for the Alternative Incarceration Methods program. Set 150 years in the future, this story will eventually have three chapters -- the Chamberlain Wedding, the Harris Service, and the Walker Birth. Enjoy! |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 28, 2009 |
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Would have gone for a nine score, but went for ten because of the silly score the Engineer handed out.
Totally liked the content and the way it was presented.
A good thing you finished this tale, contrary to your, also rather excellent "VM" submission...
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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May 22, 2007 |
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I'm ignoring my usual basis for giving marks with this story. This story pushed all my buttons and sent me over the edge. Medical (and bureaucratic) torture at its best. The level of detail and thought is great. Please write more! (10/10)
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kililiv
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Jan 3, 2007 |
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What a mind ... (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Jun 22, 2006 |
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Some strange kind of humor, precise style with clear and well-understandable descriptions - but the content becomes more silly and illogical with each chapter. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 28, 2009)
- Only thing illogic is your rating, Engie.
JJ
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jun 14, 2006 |
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Funny and painful, an interesting blend. Pretty well written! Anxious to see more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Jun 6, 2006 |
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Pretty good. Some clever humor, written
appropriately tongue-in-cheek. I am compelled,
however, to point out that the plural of
"family" is "families" (not "family's") and
the past tense of "plead" is "pleaded" or
"pled" (not "plead"). Also, the date in the
synopsis does not not match that in the text. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Jun 5, 2006 |
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I read this twice. I want to see the next chapter before raise my rating. The story is not bad. (7/10)
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