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The New Pet
Author: CarrieAnne
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(Added on May 2, 2006)
(This month 100052 readers) (Total 150281 readers) |
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Beatrice is a woman who makes a living out of finding very expensive \"pets\" for her cliente. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 10, 2009 |
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Enjoyable read. Couple of errors tho. Neglectible. Like switching from present to past tense in the same paragraph.
Or neglecting the fact that a money-transfer takes more than a couple of seconds to appear on the benificiary's account, because banking computers do the transfers at fixed time intervals, not immediately upon input.
Jean-Paul is French, so it should be "absolument" instead of "absolumon" when JP acknowledges he wants everything filmed.
But like I said, I liked the story. especially the twist at the end. And then, that last sentence...
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Oct 21, 2006 |
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Wow! You had all the elements in this story that made me squirm in my seat. It is a very well written, plotted story. Though you didn't dwell on elaborate descriptions of the sex scenes, your style only enhanced the humiliation, and that created the heat of the scenes. I could go on, but thank you for the great read. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (Oct 22, 2006)
- Thank you so much for your comments! I am glad you enjoyed my story.
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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May 25, 2006 |
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Excellent start to standard tale, but done well, so it has a freshness to it. Keep it up. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (May 25, 2006)
- Thanks for your comments. The next couple of chapters have some BIG twists coming.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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May 4, 2006 |
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To short for me, but I will wait for the next chapter. I did enjoy start of the story (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Paladin
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May 3, 2006 |
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I must reserve my full judgement until I have read further chapters. But I find this to my tastes and expect a great deal of enjoyment. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (May 3, 2006)
- I am glad you liked my story. Now that the semester is over, I will be adding to this!
- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (May 3, 2006)
- Ooops!!!
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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May 3, 2006 |
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The story's scenerio is not particularly new. However, it feels quite fresh thanks to the author's skillful story telling. The story ends with the question "to be continued?". My one critisism is that the tale is too damned short for me to give a "10" rating. That's a hint. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (May 3, 2006)
- Do I get a spanking for my story being too short? {{giggles}} I am working on the next, much longer chapter. And thanks for the positive comments.
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H Dean
(Edit) (May 3, 2006)
- Sounds tempting.
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| Reviewer:
foxeye1
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May 3, 2006 |
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An impressive start to what has the foundation of an excellent story. If this is your first attempt at writing, it is a very good one. Please continue as I would love to read more.
Thank you (9/10)
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- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (May 3, 2006)
- Thanks so much for your comments! This is my first story here.
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oldwino
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May 2, 2006 |
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good beginning to a slave training story. well written. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (May 3, 2006)
- Thank you!
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