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Holiday changes Sandra Author: Saurus
(Added on Dec 9, 2005) (This month 14681 readers) (Total 42375 readers)
Sandra and her husband decide to go on a summer holiday to Turkey, where the sun shines hard every day (40°C). But they take the wrong taxi and are both kidnapped to a deserted place in the woods. 10 days later, she will be transformed into a depraved slut doing what she is made for: being a whore. The gang lets them go home but life will never be the same…

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Reviewer: pollycoventry (Edit) Rating: Jun 2, 2007
great start (9/10)

Reviewer: kemosabe (Edit) Rating: Dec 14, 2005
Obviously the author's not accustomed to the English language. Despite that, the plot is so trite, it could belong on a comedy web site. This story line is overworked (I'm guilty as well; see "Greg's Story") but this one doesn't do it justice. (2/10)

Reviewer: H Dean (Edit) Rating: Dec 11, 2005
I have to agree with Geoff. This story is constructed so poorly that one might assume English to be the authors second or third language. I did not get through the story either, finding the sloppiness to be far more irritating than the story was worth. And, to quote Geof "I'll be more than happy to reread and revise my score if you can get the text converted to English." (3/10)

Reviewer: ilrika (Edit) Rating: Dec 11, 2005
good (7/10)

Reviewer: geoff (Edit) Rating: Dec 10, 2005
Sorry Saurus, I just gave up - Didn't even get into the story so I can't comment on plot. Get yourself a proof reader!
Para one "first thing that stroke them as the heat" - try saying "the first thing that struck them was the heat" just running a spell checker is not enough (although appreciated), you really need to get past a jumble of words so that the reader doesn't have to struggle through trying to decipher just what you are saying. Try reading it yourself after the spell check.
I'll be more than happy to reread and revise my score if you can get the text converted to English. (3/10)

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