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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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May 14, 2008 |
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Really sexy story that warms the heart, and is loveliness defined. I'm off to read the rest of Brittany's stories. Highly recommended. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Dec 11, 2005 |
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A realy great start, but would also be nice to read the second part. (9/10)
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brittany heart
(Edit) (Jan 11, 2006)
- the second part is called Vornkova's Prison
thanx for the review
Brit H
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| Reviewer:
MsMadison
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Sep 26, 2005 |
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Wonderfully rich story - great detail. And set in Russia, how cool is that! Thank you, Brittany darling. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
tiffany love
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Sep 25, 2005 |
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Absolute Brilliant! Everybody should read this story! The content of this story, blended with the images and the ‘naughty’ words created one of the sexiest story I ever read! Good Job Brittany Heart! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 25, 2005 |
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hope you add more (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Sep 25, 2005 |
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Interestng ideas, and my congratulations on a fairly unique setting. Unfortunately, your writing was not the best. You clearly understand the basics (paragraphing, sentence structure), but you need some more experience with grammar and narrative construction. Your biggest grammatical problem is run-on sentences; try chopping them up into smaller, more digestible segments. You also switch tenses at one point in the introduction - not good.
All that said, you've at least had the good sense to check your spelling and the skill to build in a reasonable amount of eros. I think, with a little care and attention to the areas I've outlined, you could produce excellent writing. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
legman00
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Sep 25, 2005 |
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looking forward to the next installment. Want to see what the girls will have to enure (8/10)
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