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Neighbour
Author: redEva
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(Added on Aug 13, 2005)
(This month 48720 readers) (Total 58796 readers) |
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Couple discovers new neighbour and have fun filled evening. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
(Edit) |
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Jan 27, 2009 |
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Deliciously hot, well crafted little vignette. Perfect example of how good writing doesn't need all too many details to paint a crystal-clear picture.
Excellent.
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Jan 27, 2009)
- Thank you for your kind review and complement.
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Oct 29, 2005 |
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You've created a really visual and hot little tale. A realistic threesome in a believable situation but it's the narrator's thoughts feelings and emotions that breathe life into this story. Thanks to Alex for pointing this out, I'm glad I caught it, better late than not at all. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Jan 26, 2006)
- Thank you for your kind review Mad Lews, I am happy you got the feel of the emotions. In my opinion the setup and props can take reader only so far, what really gives it a feel is when reader can put him/herself in the characters place. I am happy if I got my heat across.
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Oct 27, 2005 |
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Wow! Another hottie. You write as if you really did those depraved things, you naughty minx. It was very nicely executed and you hit hot buttons. Carry on, if only little bits... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Jan 26, 2006)
- Thank you nikita for another kind review, and you know, by the time I finish with this story it did feel like I actually did it lol!
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| Reviewer:
sunburststrat
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Sep 20, 2005 |
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Whew! So many potent images! This is some hot sexy erotica. I normally only go for the f/f stuff, but I have to say, I enjoyed hearing what was going on in the head of this lovely female as she was used and pleasured by the two men. One more thing ... it was awfully nice of the husband to share. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Jan 26, 2006)
- Sorry it took me so long to respond, I am very happy you liked it! and .. husband .. well it is my fantasy after all - no?!
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| Reviewer:
learningtopleez
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Aug 28, 2005 |
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This story makes me so hot! You certainly know how to get the juices running! Can't wait for more of your stories! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Aug 28, 2005)
- Glad you enjoyed it, I did … ;) as for more… I promise I’ll do my best, so … hope you enjoy those too :)
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| Reviewer:
craftygirl
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Aug 17, 2005 |
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I love this type of story - light and easy and v. v. HOT! I would like to see more of them and more of your writing! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Aug 28, 2005)
- Thank you for your kind review. I am very happy you liked it! I am working on more - hope you like those too :)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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A well-paced, fun story.... beautiful imaginings. Very enjoyable. Looking forward to more of your work! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Aug 14, 2005)
- Thank you, and thank you for your help in editing :)
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