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Mother Grounded
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jun 7, 2005)
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Mother is dominated by her daughter friend into becoming her sexual plaything. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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Harsh stuff. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dürrer
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Jun 13, 2005 |
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(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
tbank
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Jun 9, 2005 |
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Please, please, PLEASE could you use speech marks? Their absence makes the story far harder to read, and leaves the impression of a lack of respect for your readers, right or wrong. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Jun 8, 2005 |
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Excellent story well written and developed story. (7/10)
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