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Author: XtremeInk
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(Added on Mar 19, 2005)
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And you thought *your* sister was evil! This is a very, very nasty story. I repeat, VERY NASTY! This is a Supernatural Horror story. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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For me, you are conisistant, but I review based on MY intrests, which is why i review the way i do, you can't please everyone with ever story, not possible (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Mar 21, 2005 |
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An ending straight out of the "Worm Oroborus" (sic) and a story reminiscent of "Danni". Granted that a supernatural tale has no limits, however this one was a bit too over the top for this reader. I also fear that the author, one of the most powerful now posting on the site, is beginning to repeat himself, not a good sign. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
XtremeInk
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2005)
- Sorry my writing is no longer up to your standards. However, I write for my own entertainment, and, occasionally, because someone pays me for a story. As I recall, the Sara II story was not to your liking either, due to the extreme action.
I've never read Worm Oroborus. If Danni is the one that starts with the woman making pancakes, then I did read that and it sucked.
There are no new ideas. Only old ones applied in a different way.
Still, I do appreciate you taking the time to review the story. I write what I'm moved to write. Sometimes it's good -- sometimes it's bad. If the stories are that bad, perhaps it's time to stop posting here.
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lex ludite
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2005)
- Yes I must have hated Sara II to have the temerity to only rate it a NINE! I presented my reasons for this less than perfect mark, and heard nothing further from you on that matter.
The Worm Oroborus is a 400 page novel where the first and last pages are identical. It is a brilliant piece of work that got lost in the noise when The Lord of the Rings appeared.
No, the story you read is not Dani, which is a classic of excess featuring a fourteen year old victim, her twelve year-old twin step-sisters plus her mom, matched against an army of rapists at her high school and other environs. It is archived at the RPP site.
Most authors seem to be comfortable writing the same story over and over. Some do it quite well. However I'm a believer in trying to stretch one's capabilities to become an even better author; perhaps one capable of writing two or three different kind of stories over and over. I'm sorry that my review seems to have wounded your tender sensibilities, but it was done out of respect for your talent.
Any damned fool, even the ones that can't seem to type a line without making half a dozen errors, can give a story a ten. Most of these ratings are worthless since they are given strictly because the author somehow tweaked the same kink that they have. Remember that the next time you get a ten without any explanation for why it was a ten.
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SimonMagick
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Mar 20, 2005 |
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I love surrealistic erotica, and this one really delivers. Plus the ending is in perfect sync with Nietzsche's theory of eternal reacurrance. Good work. (8/10)
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Kingcodez
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Mar 19, 2005 |
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Crazy. Great job with the story. I liked the ending... (10/10)
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Dododecapod
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Mar 19, 2005 |
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WOW. This one was almost too much for me! Erotic BDSM/Horror is NOT an easy genre, but you've done an excellent job; the feeling of helplesness, the power (never explained, only experienced) of the older sister - and the lovecraftian twist at the end.I am awed.
I could make the point that the editing could be a little tighter - some typos, some missed punctuation. Nothing a few minutes review couldn't fix. (10/10)
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