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Quality by ZEBRA
Author: JEP
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(Added on Jan 3, 2005)
(This month 65552 readers) (Total 85175 readers) |
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ZEBRA is known the world over for his quality. His product is always desired above all others. He is the ultimate designer label of his product. His product: well-trained sex slaves. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 10, 2009 |
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Funny how people go to see Batman or Superman movies and come out of the theatre in awe, a broad smile on their face cuz they just seen some pretty amazing flick.
Those same people however, are screaming "far fetched!" or "unrealistic" around every corner they see a story where there's but the slightest hint of poetic freedom.
Okay, so JEP does indeed miss a few curves here. But not so that he/she crashes to death. A few bruises, maybe, yes.
Also, my room is hanging full of question marks which popped-up above my head going through "Quality By ZEBRA".
But overall, I liked the story, mumbling "this is amazing" with a chuckle along the way.
JEP may show chivalry in admitting that the writing isn't without flaws, but I have to soothe the author in admitting that the tale has its merits too.
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Jan 5, 2005 |
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i laughed through most of this story, which i doubt was your intent. one must have a serious suspension of disbelief to get past the statements that you pushed a chain up the slave's ass, yet it was tight to your finger when you fucked it AND the fact that you peed in a tub for 24 hours and managed to fill it half up. i had to stop reading at this point. if your intention was to be funny, well then ... good job; otherwise, you need to rethink this story. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
JEP3
(Edit) (Jun 6, 2005)
- I appreciate your comments. I agree that this wasn't one of my better efforts. It was thrown together much too quickly and I'll simply hide behind the notion that perhaps it is a fantasy that requires a suspension of any semblance of reality.
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