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Forced To Be A Stripper
Author: Powerone
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(Added on Nov 28, 2004)
(This month 40709 readers) (Total 81852 readers) |
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Dr. Michael's use of hypno-therapy to force girls into acts of perversion for his friends and himself. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 25, 2009 |
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Couldn't agree more with what Alex Bragi had to say. U.S. writers of erotic fiction are absolutely obsessed with measurments. That and virgins, although virgins have been taken over by their measurments, so to speak.
Furthermore, the concept of 'forcing' a victim to perform 'vile acts' through subliminal, albeit hypnotic, induction, is an 'old' fantasy, but from the pen of Powerone, it still works. More or less.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Mar 14, 2005 |
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I’m sorry but, I can’t get quite as excited about this one as the other reviewers. The story itself is good and exciting, however, I found many sentences read oddly to me. e.g. “It was their brains fighting what their bodies were doing.” I felt many passive and 'cluttered' sentences, like one, needed trimming and tightening: Their brains fought (what) their bodies (were doing).
I live outside the USA, I’m in metric measurements, so while I do understand bra sizes, I don't have much idea about5’ 10’ and 110 pounds. People who know a whole lot more about these things than I do say, “Never use exact measurements or sizes. It’s always better to use descriptions. It paints a more vivid picture in the reader’s head.” I tend to agree.
On the up side it’s intruging to read about the girl's mental torment and the sex scenes are hot.
I’m sure this is every man’s fantasy. :)
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Mar 8, 2005 |
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Very nice -- I really enjoyed the fight between her mind and body. Excellent work. (9/10)
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Ruby
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Nov 30, 2004 |
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Whew! Another hot read from Powerone.
The "good" doctor certainly knows how to bring out the best in his patients.
Though this story is complete, one can hope that more appointments with our favorite doctor will be scheduled. (10/10)
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chksng19
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Nov 28, 2004 |
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Another in a string of hit stories. Beautiful character descriptions, great narration of the things going on in the minds of those present. Crisply moving the story along, getting the reader involved deeply to see what would happen. Excellent! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Aeneas
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Nov 28, 2004 |
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Love the mind control aspect. Another great story from one of the masters. The good doctor strikes again, hopefully we will see more of his practice in the future. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 28, 2004 |
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always great, never read a bad story by you that i can remember (9/10)
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