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Slave Love
Author: Michelle Byssom
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(Added on Nov 23, 2004)
(This month 12249 readers) (Total 21920 readers) |
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A slave girl from the south is given as a gift to a prince from the north. She begins to fall in love with him and tries to make sense of the crazy world in which he lives. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Dec 2, 2005 |
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Seems like a bit out of a much larger story. well writen with 3-d characters, but without a begining or an ending it is just a snapshot of what may become a story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
MaitreDamien
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Aug 17, 2005 |
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An enjoyable story, indeed.
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| Reviewer:
Colt45
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Nov 30, 2004 |
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Writing ok, not much point to it. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
rob.wilson
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Nov 25, 2004 |
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Highly erotic, although I was thrown a bit by the structure of the story.
Is this, or will it be part of a longer work. There are questions that I have that need answered. Why was the fat man killed? How did she end up in the far north? Who is the women?
I liked the idea of the slave having to guess her Master's intent though...I may borrow that idea for something I'm working on. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Nov 23, 2004 |
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There were a couple of sentences in this story where the same adjective or verb were used closely together. Other than that I didn't see any grammarical issues. I'm still not sure I understand why the fat guy was killed, nor why the slave girl was caned. I did understand however her feelings for the prince. It was a cute story...one that brought interesting emotions to light. (9/10)
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