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The Sheik's Prize Author: Julie
(Added on Sep 25, 2004) (This month 12054 readers) (Total 29972 readers)
Southern California girl abducted by a Arabian Sheik and trained as his sex slave.

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Weighed Average (?): (5.5/10)
Average Rating: (5.5/10)
Highest Rating: (8/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: spicym (Edit) Rating: Nov 10, 2004
add more chapters (8/10)

Reviewer: castle2001 (Edit) Rating: Sep 28, 2004
All of the above. Didn't someone say that there were
only a few plots from which all writing is derived.
A western female captured and trained in a foreign land is always arousing if done well. (5/10)

Reviewer: diem (Edit) Rating: Sep 27, 2004
A well used plot, but great potential for following chapters. Don't hold back. (5/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Sep 27, 2004
Yes the plot is old and overused. But, yes, I love to see it being told another way. You have some good basic skills; see what you can do with paragraph length and completion of expressed ideas.
None of us like critics. But having this benefit here, perhaps with the help of a proofreader, might build those scores. I think you show promise: why not give it another try?
I hope you plan to add to the story; I'd like to see more. (5/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Sep 26, 2004
to much like other stories, american girl gets kidnapped, turned into a slve for a shiek, the idea is way over used, but i give you credit for trying (5/10)

Reviewer: rob.wilson (Edit) Rating: Sep 26, 2004
Take this critism in the way it's meant. Positive.
Show us, don't tell us. Don't be afraid to include descriptions as part of the dialog. You show a bit of talent, keep working on it. A few more rewrites and this could have earned an 8 from me.
Rob (5/10)

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