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Exposure
Author: jpmacpl
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(Added on May 24, 2004)
(This month 9152 readers) (Total 21404 readers) |
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Lovely wife enjoys and endures being exposed to another couple. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Feb 4, 2006 |
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Nice erotic story, believable. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 6, 2005 |
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interesting idea and concept, just needs to bem ade longerwithmore details to it, but a good start (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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May 26, 2004 |
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This was certainly erotic, and I'm sure many readers will thoroughly enjoy the build up and subsequent activity.The writing is acceptable, quite descriptive and relatively free from those distractions that get in the way of the reader's enjoyment. The ending was perhaps the strongest part of the story. It must be said that this effort did not generate sufficient heat for my particular tastes, but that's a personal preference. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
jpmacpl
(Edit) (Jun 9, 2004)
- Thanks for reading and especially taking the time to review my 'work.' Generally, I write about real life adventures, like this one, so they are not as 'hot' as the pure fantasy. Or perhaps, we just have a duller life. Anyway, I appeciate your criticism and will stive to generate more warmth in our encounters <smile>.
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