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Sophia's Diary
Author: Natalie Nessus
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(Added on May 2, 2004)
(This month 11136 readers) (Total 23204 readers) |
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A piano teacher stumbles upon her pupils diary, reads of the sensual attraction between them and decides to seduce the younger woman. But, who is seducing who? |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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spazzakazz
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Jul 19, 2011 |
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This is lovely. I'm hoping for a sequel (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 24, 2009 |
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This is sheer poetry. Nothing more, nothing less.
JJ (10/10)
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Perrin
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Apr 19, 2007 |
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Good, well-written and enjoyable. Is there a next part planned? (8/10)
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sunburststrat
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Jul 9, 2004 |
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Very sweet story. I feel in love with the both the girls. (10/10)
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Aurelius
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May 23, 2004 |
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Top marks for this sensual and delectable story. A good treatment of the competition brief. (10/10)
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warriorblack
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May 8, 2004 |
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Stupidly, I wasn't going to read this as the synopsis didn't do it for me but now I'm glad I did! This is brilliant! This is a lesson for all those who want to write short stories.The other reviewers have said it better than me. Read this story! (10/10)
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Aprilwine
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May 6, 2004 |
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This beautifully fulfils the contest requirements, incorporates the black horse and the paragraph subtly into the story and what a story!
The author (she I'm guessing) has written a tingling sensual tale of seduction set in a historical climate that is so real.
The characters are well drawn and the reader can almost taste the aching sexual tension. The story is well crafted with a nice ending.
This is a subtle and intelligent story, the best I've read so far.
I would just add that I read this story twice and will probably read it again - a sign of a classic. (10/10)
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EstabanBacca
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May 6, 2004 |
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Cette finesse de diplays d'histoire grande. Elle a une qualite feminine merveilleuse pourtant des evasions etant trop ecoeurantes. I pas lui-meme bien a la forme courte. Bravo! I look forward to more from this author. (9/10)
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Luisa
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May 5, 2004 |
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This is very erotic in a brooding sensual way. The description of that first kiss really touched me.This is a superb piece of writing, a clever story and believable. It's great! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
MitchCarson
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May 4, 2004 |
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While perhaps not explicit enough for some,
I enjoyed this tale of sultry seduction.
The two main characters are defined well
enough and their growing interaction is
believable. Even though you more or less
know where the story is going, it's a pleasant
trip and the final diary entry really puts an
exclamation point on a job well done.
A good tale on its own, even better when you
consider the requirements of the contest.
Side comment: I'm not sure where the codes
M/f and F/f truly apply. Would not Romantic
and Historical be more appropriate?
(9/10)
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WackySpurtz
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May 4, 2004 |
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Good writer except material just is not that erotic. (6/10)
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Roamer
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May 3, 2004 |
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I agree with the previous reviewer - very sexy and very, very sensuous. Excellent writing style with a slow sexy build and a smart story. Well worth a read and is far more intelligent than most stories on this site. (10/10)
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longrover
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May 3, 2004 |
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More sensuous than most on this site; a pleasing, well written tale. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
soleil
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May 3, 2004 |
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Excellent story. Well worth a read. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Wmnwholves
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May 3, 2004 |
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very good read. I would Recommend it. Met the requirement of the challenge very well. (8/10)
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