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Author: Reverie
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(Added on Jan 27, 2004)
(This month 94615 readers) (Total 118500 readers) |
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A D&S switch meets a celebrity that is also a closet switch. They, with the help of a professional dominant, enjoy a week of fantasy at a famous mansion. The story tries to capture the many situations that excite a switch. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Dec 14, 2004 |
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The stories were OK. I think that a lot more detail could be done to say thoughts or feelings rather than straight plot; develop the characters more so that the reader cares about them rather than just names, famous or not. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
reverie35
(Edit) (Dec 16, 2004)
- YOu are certainly right. It is just difficult for me to write about feelings.
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| Reviewer:
Mobius
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Apr 22, 2004 |
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Very good read. Extreamly detailed and well researched. Not my usual cup of tea, It is dificoult from the male sub point of view I normaly do not read those. But i did enjoy it.
I give it 7 stars out of 10 the missing 3 are only becouse it is not the normal angles that i like.
Dom Lesbian mother sub lesbian daughter. but very good story (9/10)
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- Replied by:
reverie35
(Edit) (Apr 23, 2004)
- Well I am confused. There is no mother, duaghter in the story and the characters an bisexual not Lesbian.
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bracemaiden
(Edit) (Dec 14, 2004)
- I got to tell you, I'm also confused. "I give it 7 stars out of 10", but he gave it a 9. Best guess - he did his review on a word processor, and copy/pasted the wrong one.
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| Reviewer:
Jones, Nikka
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Apr 4, 2004 |
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Good story. It has something for everyone, as the threads of the plot diverge and converge from one scene to the next. Prompts the reader to get to know each character as the points of view vary throughout the timeline. A difficult way to write a story but achieves a nice result. Some scenes are quite hot. Others not so much but mostly because so much wanted to be shown in one single story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
reverie35
(Edit) (Apr 4, 2004)
- Thanks for the review, and the help. Which scenes would you like to see expanded?
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| Reviewer:
robert216
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Jan 30, 2004 |
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nice developing story. reads like a true life account. just a bit confusing jumping between so many points of view, but an interesting literary approach. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
reverie35
(Edit) (Jan 30, 2004)
- Thanks for the review. As a swtich I try to present both sides of an event. The only way I could come up with was to write as both people.
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jan 28, 2004 |
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I don't usually like stories that feature celebrities, but this one was special. I admit that I did not think of the characters as the stars they were named for, and I don't think their supposed identities added anything to this tale. Would it have been better if it had not included famous names? Probably, but it is a well written and erotic account whatever you may think of the name hijacking. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
reverie35
(Edit) (Jan 28, 2004)
- I worried about the use of their names and there is a forum discussion item on the question. In the end I think that the idea of wealth and power that go with cleebrity were important enough to use the names. Thanks for the review.
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