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A Dark Night Author: Dark Rider Angmar
(Added on Nov 2, 2003) (This month 52030 readers) (Total 86641 readers)
A mother and daughter break down on a lonely road during a rainstorm. They go to a nearby house for help and are then used by a group of men.

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Weighed Average (?): (7/10)
Average Rating: (7.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: bmtphoenix (Edit) Rating: Oct 12, 2007
Good story, good job writing it. Not exactly groundbreaking, but well done. (9/10)

Reviewer: jip (Edit) Rating: Mar 27, 2006
Very good story. good job (8/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Nov 1, 2004
i found it a wonderful read, good job (7/10)

Reviewer: jbowler65 (Edit) Rating: Nov 5, 2003
Very nice premise, but the story could use more detail to be great. (6/10)

Reviewer: GaryWilcox (Edit) Rating: Nov 4, 2003
While the story is nothing new and the writing is all over the place, this story could be something great with some rewrites and helpful assistance. (5/10)
Replied by: DarkRiderAngmar (Edit) (Nov 4, 2003)
Gary,
Thank you for the honest assessment. By 'writing all over the place' what do you mean? Could you give an example? This is my first attempt at publishing fiction.
How would you rewrite a piece just so I can see what you mean?
Any help would be appreciated.
Joe

Reviewer: frenchgus (Edit) Rating: Nov 3, 2003
good (9/10)

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