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The Sheriffs Black Reward
Author: Boomer
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(Added on Sep 5, 2003)
(This month 81127 readers) (Total 103596 readers) |
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Two black girls on a trip are kidnapped by the Sheriff of a local town. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 8, 2003 |
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Keep up the GREAT work, love the genre, hope many more chapters appear, also hope the girls keep getting humiliated more, and more
non-conset is the best story line for stories (9/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Sep 6, 2003 |
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A pretty good effort, so far, I think, and as Lex has written it's nice to see attractive women of color finally being extended the same opportunities (for bondage and rape) as the middle and upper class white girls who populate most of our contemporary stories. An opportunity, that Diana and Ebony will almost certainly come to regret as the story goes forward ... I think the author has missed (so far) an opportunity to endow the young ladies with as much personality as he might have done. But the story has promise. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
boomerez41
(Edit) (Sep 6, 2003)
- I thank you for your comments. I will go ahead and post the rest of the story. This is my first story and I enjoy the feedback.
Boomer
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lex ludite
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Sep 5, 2003 |
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The writing is acceptable and the use of a pair of black girls as victims is a switch from the usual cast of characters. Unfortunately they also come across as cliches'. Everything else from the sheriff to his secret hideaway has fingerprints all over it. To quote Yogi Berra, "it's deja vu all over again." (4/10)
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