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Improving Our Marriage
Author: Dan Butler
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(Added on Aug 9, 2003)
(This month 33225 readers) (Total 64148 readers) |
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The main character falls in love with, marries, and becomes the slave to a beautiful woman. She and her friends abuse him and deprive him of sexual stimulation by using a chastity belt. Ultimately, he is locked in it for life. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
aturfeet66666
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Jul 30, 2011 |
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Amazing story. Shockingly cruel and yet beautiful. (9/10)
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hb60
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Jun 20, 2011 |
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OMG! What a story.....Ultimate love, ultimate giving and the sacrifices given. Easily a love story with VERY kinky elements! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
makito
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Jul 10, 2005 |
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This is great. It's time for Dan to write again. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
gnrjr
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Mar 13, 2004 |
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I enjoyed it is a little cruel and unthinkable at the end (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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An amazing decent into total slavery, albeit somewhat unrealistic however. (7/10)
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abitbent
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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The diction was well put together, and no spelling mistakes which was nice. It's a good read if fantasy is your thing, but most of the things this slave endures is unrealistic, which for me, becomes a turn off. Still, it's a fun fantasy. (6/10)
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