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David and Jonathan
Author: dav4jon
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(Added on Aug 7, 2003)
(This month 51705 readers) (Total 60226 readers) |
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For the love of his big brother a young teenager deliberately humiliates himself at his feet. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Stefanie1391
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Sep 30, 2006 |
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Although the dialogue is indeed far too mature, I liked it a lot. It brought a smile on my face (aw, how cute...). (8/10)
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jip
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Apr 12, 2006 |
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Even when I'm not into M/m still I find it an exiting story, and believable. Children do more sexual games with each other than we would expect. Perhaps that some dialogues could not match the ages, still it stays a good story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Belly
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Jan 28, 2005 |
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The dialogue is horrid. Not at all true to a young teenager. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
stefani
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Mar 2, 2004 |
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A not very impressive and very short story (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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An interesting delve into the psyche! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
marcopolo
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Aug 8, 2003 |
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Lovely, cute, moving and... refreshing.
The story is well constructed, well written, makes sense (unlike too many others), and is just about the perfect length.
Plus it is so much better when the sub is not 'taken' but willingly 'gives' him/herself. Hope there will be many sequels. (10/10)
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