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Hooker
Author: Harold
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(Added on Aug 7, 2003)
(This month 24304 readers) (Total 47047 readers) |
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Bob was attracted to Rachel from the first moment he saw her. This may have had something to do with the handcuffs she was wearing at the time. He was not, however, the only one who wanted her. Another story in the Want Ad/Palmistry/Therapy series. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Corinna80
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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Like most of your stories a wonderful imagery written down in a perfect storyline.
I came from another page (leviticus) and were quite surprised to see your stories here too - so this gave me the kick to read them again after years. My memory was right, your stories stay among my all time favourites.
I wonder if you're still writing as I would love to read more of your work.
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CrazyMe
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May 29, 2005 |
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Great work. I really like your stories - esecially the characters who are believeable. What else can I say? Well written, good plot. I think you could have prolonged it without ruining it, but maybe I am just greedy. (9/10)
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ron8nl
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Aug 13, 2003 |
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The rating speaks for it self. High reality level like a thriller but still sexually tempting. If i may suggest anything: letting Rachel develop an O like submission would ad to my joy. Hope the author doesn't like an incest angle, since that is an option for the story as well. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Harold
(Edit) (Aug 13, 2003)
- Not to worry. No incest, no underage sex.
- Replied by:
ron8nl
(Edit) (Aug 17, 2003)
- I red the last episode (aug.17) and I thank you for the story Harold. You provide us with a proper turn and ending, though to modest for me. You could do far more with this idea. May be you should look into the stories "Dawns tale" on this site and the book Histoire d'O to get into the combination of deptness and D/s sexuality.
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Emily
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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I agree, this has a good storyline and is a bit different than your average ones. I can see lots of creativity here. (9/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Aug 8, 2003 |
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So far I really liked it (I have to confess I like a slow build). I like the details of architecture and fashion. Good use of grammar and story development. Let's hope that future installments live up to the promise of the start.
e.e. norcod (9/10)
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