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Nazi Prison Camp
Author: Powerone
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(Added on Jul 31, 2003)
(This month 85672 readers) (Total 142200 readers) |
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The Germans had captured France and the soldiers were taking the young girls to prison for their pleasure. This is the story of Loren as she is captured and raped. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 11, 2004 |
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I love Nazis but they really didn't do much. (5/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 21, 2004 |
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like the codes, did not care at all for the fact that Nazi's were used (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Aug 4, 2003 |
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Nasty and intense enough to suit us fans of 'heavy' stories. But the story line is overly familiar, and there were a couple of flaws (IMO)that kept me from giving it a better score. First, the author (like many) confuses plurals and possessives repeatedly. Nazis take prisoners. Not Nazi's. Also, I don't recall that any effort was made to deal with the presumed language difficulty of a German officer speaking to a French schoolgirl. (In fairness, I'm sure that I have been guilty of similar omissions); but such things become particularly noticeable when the officer uses an expression like 'pre-cum'; it seems unnatural to me that a schoolgirl who speaks another language would understand such an expression.
Having the German officer speaking English (which, in this context, we would take to be French) in a German accent would give the story a more natural tone. Finally, the characters, particularly Loren, could be more vivid; just because the Nazis treat her like a piece of meat doesn't mean that she IS just a piece of meat. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Barbara Anne
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Aug 1, 2003 |
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Some improvements are evident but just a little bit lacking in irony and way too predictable from the outset. None the less, the story was well written. Perhaps the storyline could be given greater thought in your future? (9/10)
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mica
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Jul 31, 2003 |
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Love your story style. Character description excellent. (10/10)
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