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The Training of Lainnie
Author: Lainnie
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(Added on Mar 4, 2003)
(This month 16814 readers) (Total 33955 readers) |
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A submissive in training, Slow to start. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Gingerkitten
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Mar 9, 2003 |
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The story has a lot of promise. While I think the head of the organization's characterization of the role of the sex's is false and oversimplified, I found it believable for his character. I found it odd that Michael would be out with Johnny so much...and not have any awareness of the organization...it was not explained to my satisfaction. But the story has a lot of promise and the first segment leaves me curious about where it is going. I will be watching it...after all many women fantasize about a man "training" them to be his submissive...a man they love. Read segment two and I was hot reading it...good going. The colder aspect of the group..is a twist I assume we have been prepped to expect. smile...well who knows it could be very hot. Great start Lainnie....keep going. Ginger (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
peachmellon
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Mar 6, 2003 |
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not bad at all.. was worth reading. i hope more will be added to your story.. Thank you so much (8/10)
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