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The Inventor
Author: BDSM Bill
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(Added on Jan 7, 2003)
(This month 54208 readers) (Total 66631 readers) |
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A man has invented a device that allows him to control anyone. What would you do with that kind of power? |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
MrMan
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Apr 14, 2004 |
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This one is really fresh!
Like Engineer, I like a good NC/MC story without cruelty.
Sometimes just having the POWER is enough- no need to get gratuitous! (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 13, 2004 |
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would not expect anything less, you always write great (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
dav4jon
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Aug 9, 2003 |
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Mind control stories are not usually my cup of tea but I found this one very interesting and pleasant. And, indeed, it started me thinking: "what would *I* do with this power?" When you think about a story after you've finished reading it isn't that a sign the story is good? (8/10)
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Tim_Id
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Mar 22, 2003 |
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I became interested in this author after reading Gambling Debt and can see a trend here, abductors with a warm heart. The sex could be more graphic in this story, but a good tale. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Jan 11, 2003 |
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Really entertaining in any regard. Also I like the concept of involuntary submission without cruelty. More, please! (9/10)
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askpaul
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Jan 10, 2003 |
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This was great. I hope that you continue with this theme (9/10)
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robert216
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Jan 9, 2003 |
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Cute little story, nice pace, good ending (8/10)
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