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underher247
Author: underher
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(Added on Aug 25, 2012)
(This month 18939 readers) (Total 37284 readers) |
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man learns to be the perfect husband . |
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| Reviewer:
feetslave678
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Aug 30, 2012 |
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Great Writeup under her! Extremely captivating.. I have just read the half yet, since I am saving the rest for another day, but even the half was extremely enjoyable and highly realistic..
Have to say, two key things that I loved about your story was the Foot fetish that you included (can't thank you enough for it) and the Indian character that you have given, it is just so much more exotic because of it! Great work..
Possible suggestions for future updates, how about including, objectivism in the form of human furniture (foot stool, chair, carpet, nightstand) and animal role-play (dog, worm)?
Also, I know you would get the mother-in-law to dominate Sam but everybody does that now in their stories, so why not get Rashmi to dominate her father in the story, would be highly erotic!
Final request, whatever the storyline, please don't stop writing, pl do give updates to the story.. really look forward to them!
Kudos! :D (9/10)
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