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The Kink Palace
Author: Nephthys
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(Added on Jul 21, 2012)
(This month 50999 readers) (Total 69847 readers) |
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In the near future, a young woman fulfills her fantasy of becoming a prostitute at Japans most famous brothel: the Kink Palace, a brothel with no limits. Only price-tags. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
goodgirlxxxx
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Oct 7, 2012 |
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Nice Idea hoping for a continuation. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dr. White
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Aug 22, 2012 |
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Nice start. Quite a lot of back story there, still kind of enthralling. I can't wait to read the next part. The action that is there is pretty good I just wish there were more of it. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 28, 2012 |
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Unlike the previous reviewer, I'm not high on the seemingly infinite series of digressions. Otherwise good, and you chose a good cliff-hangerly place to quit. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
CoughDrop
(Edit) (Jul 30, 2012)
- I love a good back story, but Curtis raises a good point - need it be rolled out at pivotal points in the story? Just as we think we are about to bite into something juicy, we get... A history lesson.
You stoke the fire, then abandon the bellows.
Luckily, I've an imagination that's easily stoked. Even so, Curtis raises a valid point.
But do not let this stop you continuing to add to this story, Nephthys! I'm on tender hooks wanting to know what happens in the next chapter.
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| Reviewer:
CoughDrop
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Jul 25, 2012 |
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Loving the development in this story. The time cuts add a great deal to the tension. Dearly hoping you continue! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
alexandra_p27
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Jul 25, 2012 |
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Great story, hope you will continue. (9/10)
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