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The Club
Author: Isolde Hexham
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(Added on Jul 15, 2012)
(This month 15515 readers) (Total 24604 readers) |
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Middle-aged single woman looks for naughty adventure |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 22, 2012 |
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"Never start a story with 'I'"? Unbelievable. Neither terribly cliched nor dull, and there's nothing wrong with setting a scene. I wish we could rate reviewers.
Not bad. Please submit again (he smirked, twirling his mustache). (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dred Tory
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Jul 17, 2012 |
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Never start a story with "I". Very cliched and dull. I stpped reading after the first seven paragraphs or so. Try to jump into the action as soon as possible next time. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Major Littmann
(Edit) (Jul 18, 2012)
- What a ridiculous review, if you didn't read the whole submission how can you make a sensible
comment on it.
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Jul 16, 2012 |
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Maybe lost it's way at the end but a very good original read. (8/10)
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