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Alaskan Extreme
Author: Poppcorn
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(Added on Jul 15, 2012)
(This month 31979 readers) (Total 48392 readers) |
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Jack has his ultimate dream come true when he Kidnaps young Jaslyn a college coed and takes her to his remote self sustaining cabin deep in the Alaskan wilderness and makes her his slave for life.. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
willowspirit
(Edit) |
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Sep 9, 2012 |
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Very Good! The co-ed's name changed about halfway through. I'd stick with the name that sounds more different from the male lead character's name, IE. Jaslyn.
What makes this story remarkable to me, and so very different from almost all I have ever read(over YEARS!) on this site and others, is the care you took to get into the Dominant's mind as he simultaneously grows Himself into becoming a Master, as He also is forming her into becoming His slave. The thought you demonstrated into this aspect of the story, and the skill you showed in writing up these insights, makes it immensely worthwhile and highly recommendable!
Please write more...pretty please. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
stormbay
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Jul 17, 2012 |
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I can't wait to read more, but it did bother me when you changed the slave's name halfway through... (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Poppcorn
(Edit) (Jul 18, 2012)
- my friend that helped me edit the story accidentally changed the name.. and we missed it until after it had already been sent in. sorry it will be Jaslyn from now on.
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