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Chosen
Author: Rajda Polkus
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(Added on Apr 22, 2012)
(This month 48136 readers) (Total 86224 readers) |
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Two young women caught a rich man who's into alternate lifestyle. They have been transported to a training facility where they are being prepared for their new life. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (5.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (6/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
greatbossman
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Rating: |
Apr 24, 2012 |
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Good start to the story. A little lacking in description of surroundings. Story parts need to be about twice the length to generate ongoing interest (6/10)
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