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Anna
Author: James Winter
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(Added on Apr 8, 2012)
(This month 10897 readers) (Total 18393 readers) |
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Anna has a very interesting sex life with her husband. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Apr 18, 2012 |
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Generally excellent, but two problems: First, at the beginning of the scene with the sister you call Anna by the wrong name. Second, you're the sixth author I've read in the last couple of days who spells 'lose' or 'loser' as if they were 'loose' or 'looser'. I don't understand it.
I disagree with the reviewer below about being lacking in character development. The first scene tells me all I need to know to start enjoying the story, and more is revealed in each subsequent scene. I don't know how the character development could be any better. The pacing is great. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
_ID_
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Apr 15, 2012 |
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Interesting story line, but the character buildup lacked development. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Borborad
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Apr 11, 2012 |
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Love the cuckquean topic, (too little of those here) although the story could hav ebeen smoother in the build up (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
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Apr 11, 2012 |
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Whilst I liked the overall story I found the episodic nature a bit jerky. Having said that, it's a good beginning and there is plenty of promise for more. I do hope there will be more. (8/10)
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