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The LAW Student
Author: bigbobby.
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(Added on Mar 31, 2012)
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From the headlines. 3rd year Law student at an eastern school is more than meets the eye as her story takes twists and turns. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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Rating:  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
subalo
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Apr 25, 2012 |
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Grammar, spelling and use of the name are really off putting. I really had to struggle to finish a lot of it. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Michael247
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Apr 6, 2012 |
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Damn. Where's the rest of it?
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This is one of those classic spots where a simplistic plot and a fuck fest's worth of sex is smashed into as small a spot as possible. Despite the length of the work, the absolute shallowness of the characters, and the stilted action descriptions, this story seems to hum with a power that is quite... unexplainable.
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Part of me can't help wondering if this is a political satire as well as being erotica. The *ahem* similarities to a certain female, women's productive rights, law student at an "eastern school", who might have recently testified in front of Congress isn't very subtle. Maybe it's just a fluke. ;) I try to keep politics out of my writing, but this story captures the hypocrisy of a woman who is a productive rights activist, demanding that she get free contraceptive care because otherwise it would cost her a thousand dollars a year.
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From a story telling perspective, the tale is fast, choppy, and mostly dialog. It moves the plot quickly, but leaves most to your imagination. I could never write like this. It's the difference between having a porterhouse sirloin and getting a Big Mac. The problem is that while we all like a porterhouse, sometimes we WANT the Big Mac.
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I'm with Major Littmann about wanting the rest of this tale, and remember, I HATE serials.
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Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
(www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Mar 31, 2012 |
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Surprisingly exciting,I was not expecting much from 10kb but look forwad to further parts. (9/10)
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